tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840588901575250438.post6220385950031444783..comments2016-05-05T08:03:32.024+02:00Comments on To Florence and Back: The SACI Creative Writing forum: Lee Fousthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02998028247715706736noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840588901575250438.post-42800720713152783492011-03-22T19:39:18.461+01:002011-03-22T19:39:18.461+01:00Lee, feel free to fix my grammar and punctuation a...Lee, feel free to fix my grammar and punctuation any time. Everything is always stream of conscious, and while I'm working on paying attention to the important details I still suck.M. Elizabeth Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10576494091170466740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840588901575250438.post-80317065388471554122011-03-15T00:13:48.337+01:002011-03-15T00:13:48.337+01:00Nice one (said one lone wolf to another). I moved ...Nice one (said one lone wolf to another). I moved a couple of commas and a period and fixed a type O. I would be specific in the penultimate sentence, i.e.: are leaders better than followers--or are the one type of person better than the other type? or? perhaps a double dash between "no" and "we wolves..."Lee Fousthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02998028247715706736noreply@blogger.com