tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840588901575250438.post4321366958079159647..comments2016-05-05T08:03:32.024+02:00Comments on To Florence and Back: The SACI Creative Writing forum: BeforeLee Fousthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02998028247715706736noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2840588901575250438.post-72541587542866718062011-09-14T16:32:42.889+02:002011-09-14T16:32:42.889+02:00Sarah (Ciafoletti?),
Quite tasty! Ha ha, read it ...Sarah (Ciafoletti?),<br /><br />Quite tasty! Ha ha, read it a couple of times now and I quite like it. It sort of veers towards being a bit too explicit for my taste at the end--after toying with so much food imagery and sexy verbs. Reminded me, at first, of the old Alfred Hitchcock adage, "Shoot loves scenes like a murder and murders like love scenes."<br /><br />--LeeLee Fousthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02998028247715706736noreply@blogger.com